Fragmented Fates by Nancy Foster

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The hero. The seer. The child. The condemned. After surviving two bloody purges that nearly exterminated both the Grey Clan and Orsenmuray City, the elf and harlequin survivors struggle to bring the tent city of Almjarhad to life. Surrounded by the ocean and desert, these inhospitable lands are slowly being developed with the aid of their magic. As the culprit of their misfortune, the condemned elf Lord Jamarnid is forced to rely on his son Jarahad to rule the city due to ending up disabled before his frantic escape. Bitter about his situation because he wanted to be executed, Jamarnid distrusts the true intentions of the seer Talgel. Unwanted by the Elf Kingdom and his harlequin great-grandfather Hurrujat, Jarahad struggles to accept his fate. As the interim ruler of Almjarhad, Jarahad wishes to complete his sword initiation to protect his people... and gain Talgel's unrequited love. Talgel is a woman of perpetual mystery with dubious morals. Upon awakening magic that grants her the ability to predict the future with absolute certainty, Talgel lost her eyesight. She now wears a masquerade mask to hide her true feelings. Embroiled in this story is a young hybrid elf named Tioja, who doesn't understand his role in the greater scheme of things. Four characters are about to have their fates manipulated, and their willpower tested. All for the sake of a demon inhabiting Talgel's body that will use them for its own nefarious purposes.

Adult • Horror • Fantasy/Sword and Sorcery • Fantasy/Dark • Diversity Representation/Disability • Diversity Representation/Mental Health

Content Warning: animal death, child death, violence (limbs being crushed with hammers, beheaded heads in boxes, a brief vision of a female character being strangled to death by love interest)

Menendezbe

The plot was unclear, and the story ended abruptly. More importantly, the theme was unclear. Awkward sentence structure and use of words further obscured the meaning. Intriguing world, but the story could have used editing.

SteveWestenra author